LEVI'S COLD TASK

 In class we do a 'cold Task' to find out what we already know. Our cold task was on narrative writing. This is a snap shot of what I can do in 30 minutes by myself.We are learning to self-assess our writing so we know what we are good at and what we need to work on.What I want to improve on is putting punctuation in the right place.

COLD TASK TERM 2 2022 NARRATIVE 

Write a narrative, this could be a story you make up or a whanau story you retell. 

Name: Levi                  intro                

One day a little boy was at his nan and koro's house, he was only two and a half years old and his nan loved him with all her heart. The Little boy Burns his self with Boiling hot water then we met his Mum and the newborn baby in the hospital.                                       Hot coffe

One ning the little boy went into his nan and koro´s room looking around just minding his own business until he sore a drink but did not know it was a hot coffie, so he went to drink it and it went all on his chest! He was screaming until his koro gave him a cold shower and took him to the hospital when they got to the hospital they Sore the boy's Mum because the Mum had a newborn baby that was very sick.